Wow...this left me literally breathless! These were and still are, and always will be my thoughts of Link and Zelda's sad and unrequited love...but you can actually put those thoughts in words, something I can never do...or, not at least up to your supreme level of writing.

Hmm... this one was nice... not as good as "Unrequited" though...

I'm off to read the third part!

- Selah!

You've done it again. So well-written, so touching, so sad! I love it, love it, love it!

*sniff sniff* I love it! I love you! I love this site! I LOVE IT ALL!

Poor, poor Malon. . .Stupid Link. Everyone knows Malon is better than Zelda! Everyone! I like Malink stories. I do not care much for Zelda, but hey! This is not my story!

This was still beautiful! I can't wait to see Malon's POV! *I love you!*

Once again, excellent writing.

That was so beautiful! Kind of L/Z, but kind of not. You write so well!

Write on!

Yume

I'm not sure if this is the right word, but this fanfiction seems very poetic, in other words it has a good portrayal of emotion. I really feel sorry for the characters. Good job!

I feel so bad for Malon, Link and Zelda. Malon's married to a man that doesn't love her. (Or at least not as much as he does Zelda.) And Link and Zelda are being torn up by regret. This and 'Unrequited' are two very well written fics that really makes you feel for these three characters. I'm glad that you've decided to conclude this story with 'Faithful.' I do hope it ends on a high note.

THE AUTHOR: Avinash Tyagi, I'm actually writing the third and final part of "Unrequited" and "Resuscitation" along with the next chapter of "Quill and Ink". It will be called "Faithful". Watch for it!

Write a sequel to these two stories.

Wow... I'm lost for words. Very heartfelt and poetic. You wrote very professionally, something I really respect in authors.

It's pretty good, although I don't really have anything to say at the moment cuz I'm not really in the mood to read fanfics...

I’m glad you decided to write a follow-up to “Unrequited.” This continued the story arc very well, and provided enough of insight for the reader to develop an attachment to the events. I enjoyed how you left the ending open for possibly another sequel – a forbidden liaison and the repercussions would make for a great novella.

I really liked the line: “Would a diamond be happy set in dirt?” That just can’t be beaten. Great job.