 0ddLikeM3 3/17/12 . chapter 1Well written, but can't say I enjoy rape fics. :-( |
 Yamanvie 12/17/11 . chapter 1Wow! So intense, so hot and sexy and emotional. How could anyone not LOVE it! Amazing work, as always. Whoa! |
 Ofeliarage 12/13/11 . chapter 1A wonderful story with a perfect ending! Your story telling is brilliant & interest is not ever lost in this. |
 xallfalldownx 10/21/11 . chapter 1I don't think I will ever be able to get over the way you manage to get characterization down so perfectly. The ending was absolutely gorgeous as well, just wow. |
 Piggy7869 8/30/11 . chapter 1 All I had to say when I finished the story was DAMN! I cannot believe that I had seriously contemplated on leaving the story half way through. Now I'm so grateful that I didn't. Your writing style is truly superb and ingenious. The plot was definitely original. I've never read something like this on Sasuke's return but I'm glad I did. Frankly to me this is the best story of Sasuke's return and I would read it time and time again. Love your stories and can't wait for the next one! 3 |
 Gothic Lust 8/3/11 . chapter 1OMG! I Love that. It is so true, some love and the death of those two bastards and everything will be all right in Sasuke's world. :D I don't think Konoha will mind their deaths in the least. ;) This was absoultely amazing. Truly stuck to character. Now I'm off to read the sequel! :D |
 xDelfin 7/25/11 . chapter 1Waaaaah x-x this is exactly the kind of story I was looking for! Dark, Reasonable drama, minimal/weighty dialogue, MASSAGE, LEMONS, interesting style of description and an open ended happy ending. Thank you so much. I enjoyed it throroughly :]
YHS
xDelfin |
 kaname-luvr 7/12/11 . chapter 1wow, i was not sure what to expect at the end of this. At first i thought, well, naruto is going to let sasuke get his revenge, and then when they were both all somber and stuff, i thought, uh oh! maybe naruto is going to kill him to free him, and then... then back to square one. Loved it! |
 XxCharlottexX1 4/30/11 . chapter 1Naruto was pretty dark in this, your right. That's for sure. I still like the story though; it made me sad; but i understood some things at the same time. Idk what they are; but i realized something.
All i know is i loved the story; i think it's a little dark for V-day though xD
Oh well, i liked it. |
 Maomee 11/18/10 . chapter 1What can I say but another well done story! I love how cunning and thoughtful you made Naruto. How his plans just come together. I think what I enjoyed the most was how you made what looked like it was going to be rape wasn't. Again I asked myself, "How are you going to pull this off... and still make it good?" I expected a typical scene. Oh I don't want this but the pleasure is so outstanding that I just must give in and change all that I am, blah blah blah...
But it wasn't that at all. Your use of an extended massage to bring relaxation, to break down resistance... your slow movements to allow acceptance...all coupled with years of loneliness and confusion... fascinating and believable.
Add to that, Sasuke didn't just off and change his mind just because of 3 days of mind-numbing sex. No, closure was still needed. And you brought it in a most interesting way.
Fantastic work! Thank you for your continued excellence in story-telling. |
 purvy sage 9/12/10 . chapter 1Wow... I don't even know what to say... that was incredibly intense and an unexpected ending too.
Would he kill them? Would he not?
BTW, I run a massage therapy office and found it extra amusing because I do see on a regular basis how a simple massage can turn the most hard edged bastard CEO into a giggling simpleton. So why would Sasuke be any different? LOL |
 scared of darkness 9/3/10 . chapter 1haha.. Nice little twist at the end. |
 SarissaDiablo 8/22/10 . chapter 1Wow, that was really artistic and hot. Go Naruto for giving Sasuke his revenge! |
 Ishiguro Ayumu 8/3/10 . chapter 1sigh. if only the show would do that... i loved the story. |
 Chasing 7/22/10 . chapter 1This was SO good to read! fuck, man... that was good. So keep up the good work! |