i liked it i was mad at them for the virus so keep writing. ;{ dont get mad at my name i have commitment problems.

BASH ASHA! SUPPORT MAX/LOGAN! uhh... WOO!

I just read this and I know its been over two years so there's probably no chance of you finishing it, although it'd be interesting if you did. You know, just to see how much you've grown as a writer. Anyways I'm mainly just responding because I just read your bio space. As a human being, I thought it was hysterical and as an American from the USA I gotta say I wish it wasn't so cold in Canada because I'd move there in a heartbeat cause I hear the government there actually takes care of it's citizens, you know itstead of just taking as is the custom in the good ole USA.

Anyways, I hope you really think about finishing this.

Peace out!

hi i really liked ur fic update !

thnx

excellent fic

Intresting begining. It could have stood alone, untill you added chapter two. Now it despratly needs chapters three and four...

Well, I'm no writer so I'm no judge, but I loved Max's monologue in this one. Call me a sucker for sentimentality, but I liked it.

Please write a conclusion, I want to know how it ends!

I will be very forthcoming about this...neglect to finish and die. :D

Hehe, j/k.

I am interested in seeing how this plays out, so please do continue.

What I especially like about this is how his denial prompts him to prepare for the event of her stopping by. For me, all the emotion came from that. Good job.

This is a good story! Please continue!

Sweet and sad... I like it.

What's with the rubber chickens, PG? This is really nice. Brought a tear to my eyes.

Boo Hoo Hoo! I am in tears! More please

I she pregnant then? I don't want her to go away after one night.

I love this story so of course I want to know what happens next. The part with Max talking about what occurred at Manticore was perfect.

I love it! I thought the song fit perfect for the story...anyways PLEASE keep on writin and post the next chapter soon!

Please write more. This is really good.