hi this is the person before and what i said before im sorry about that i was talking on the phone and i roungt it on accendent sorry about that. i hop you canfor give me?

okey forr one this is cool but you need to add more chapters on this

oh no! poor trunks!

but still, great story :)

Poor Trunks.

That was good by the way.

Could you please make another chapter cause I just dont see that being the end. And besides, I want to see what happens next.

This story is really good!

oh no! Poor Trunks!

haha sux to be him!

I remembered that story ;)

Somehow, I did... even after all those years from the Trunks7 ;)

HOW ARE YOUR SARAH ? :D

*glomps Sarah*

hi! i just wanted 2 say that ur story a hole in time is really good. and i was wondering if you can write some more chappies cause the ending is kinda like a cliffhanger like u dont know wat's gonna happen next. its killin me! :-S trunks is my fav. character just 2 let u know wats urs?

any way if u could email me it'd be great.:-D thanx!

Adrianna

I like the idea; I'd like to see what you do with it. Somehow I can't see it ending here. This Sul has a history. Where did he come from? How did he make the time machine dissappear (or did the time machine dissapear on it's own)? Did Bulma go looking for her son? The only OOC I found was Trunks not knowing and not interested in the technology, that's something he inherited from his mother's side and would be an asset to him. This has potential. Please tell me if you do more for this one. :)