|Reviews for Tension Tighter Than A Loaded Gun|
| Ms Briar 1/14/13 . chapter 15
Aw dude this time I DID cry
| Ms Briar 1/14/13 . chapter 14
Dude... I almost cried
| LivinJgrl123 12/15/12 . chapter 23
And I'm off to read the sequel :)
By the way, this was awesome. Not even kidding. What you did in this... You made me cry, laugh, and gawk. Not many fics (usually South Park fics make me gawk but thts it) can do that! You're an epic writer, and mistakes or not, this was awesome.
| Sita 11/18/12 . chapter 11
Dude...I'm in love
| XxVPMxX 9/9/12 . chapter 1
THIS IS THE BEST CREEK FANFIC EVER :DDDD PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL :O 3
| Guest 9/3/12 . chapter 14
I'd been waiting for this to happen since chapter 6, so thank you. Guessing what's gonna happen correctly makes me so happy. Even if it is a bit sick...
| Miss Cocca Bean 7/19/12 . chapter 9
Best sex scene EVER. It was aggressive at fist then ended lovingly. I've never watered at the mouth before haha.
It's probably too late but I did enjoy the teacher. Your one of the few writers who actually writes a name and personality to a teacher.
Again your a great writer.
| RagDollPhysicist 5/22/12 . chapter 1
I know I just started reading this even though it's been out forever, but I mainly have two things to say about this:
a. VERY promising start to the series
b. Of course it's more sexual that TDTF. Craig is one of the major characters, and also the sexiest beast in the South Park fanfic universe. There is (hardly) a way to write him that DOESN'T involve major sexing of at least one other key character. xp
| Sunshine-aki 3/30/12 . chapter 23
Is the sequel up?... I don't see it.
So uh, shouldn't tweek be getting arrested? I mean, I hope he'll pull a "damsel is distress" and be all "he raped Craig! And made me watch!" etc. I mean, that's a valid reason.
Anyway. I like your little fights at the end of each chapter.
This story... I think it traumatized me a bit. But it was still really good.
| Guest 3/30/12 . chapter 14
Dude. I totally just noticed the bold.
| Guest 3/29/12 . chapter 5
Hahahahhha someone used NAMBLA in a joke! I dont feel so alone anymore! Nobody seems to be as amused when I make jokes like that...
| scribblesTHEotaku 2/8/12 . chapter 23
Gah! This story was crazy awesome! I was always at the edge of my seat wanting to know what would happen next. And the sneek peak of the sequel is just gah! I can't wait to be able to read it. This fic was amazing! Great ending. I like how it ended with a question. I bet the sequel will be just as great if not better. Keep up the great work. Hope to see the sequel soon.:)
| Tsuki6047 6/17/11 . chapter 1
its cool great job (:
| A long time fan 6/15/11 . chapter 23
cap's lock don't fail me now, this mother fuckin' story deserves to be reviewed in full caps lock in all it's wonderful glory
AND NOW WE BEGIN!
HAVE YOU ANY IDEA HOW MANY TIMES I'VE READ THIS? THAT I BEGAN TO READ THIS LIKE, WHEN IT WAS ONLY SEVEN CHAPTERS OR SOMETHING? DO YOU HAVE ANY GOSH DARN IDEA HOW WELL THIS IS WRITTEN! HOW IT'S SO FUCKING BRILLANT THAT IT CAN STAND ALONE ON IT'S OWN, AS A GOD DAMN PIECE OF MAJESTIC ART WORK! YOU HAVE WOVEN COMPLEX CHARACTERS WITH LAYERED WANTS, NEEDS, FEARS, THOUGHT PROCESSING AND INTERNAL GROWTH, YOU HAVE GIVEN US A TRUE HONEST TO GOD AMAZING PLOT THAT TWISTS AND TURNS BUT NEVER DEVIATES FROM THE MAIN REASON FOR WHICH THIS WAS WRITTEN! THE CHARACTERS POINT OF VIEW ARE INDUVIDUALLY UNIQUE AND THE TONE OF YOUR NARRITIVE ACTUALLY CHANGES WITH THE CHARACTERS CHANGE IN POINT OF VIEW AND FOR GOSH SAKES DO YOU UNDERSTAND HOW INVESTED YOU BECOME IN THESE CHARACTERS! AND HOW THEY HAVE THINGS YOU BOTH DISLIKE AND LIKE ABOUT THEM AND YOU SIT AT YOUR COMPUTER LAUGHING WHEN THEY DO THE RIDICULOUS AND SCOLDING THEM WHEN THEY ARE WRONG! AND FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS THAT ARE HOLY WHAT YOU DID WITH BUTTERS!
, "I'ah know it doesn't seem like I'ah should be one t'know, but I'ah do. I'ah know what it's like t'have a...rough boyfriend." Butters blushed slightly at this, before turning his own glare on Craig, and the raven was surprised to see the passion in those ocean-blue eyes. "But Eric at least has th' balls t'admit he's my boyfriend, an' he treats me nice. I'ah know you're not datin' Tweek, otherwise you'd tell people 'cuz you don't really care what people think. I'ah don't know why Tweek is lettin' you do that, and I'ah don't wanna ask him or nuthin', but if I'ah find out you pushed 'im too much and that's why he's here, then both me an' Eric'll kick your ass. Because even Eric thinks rape is disgustin' an' unforgivable, no mater who it is."
DO YOU KNOW HOW IN CHARACTER THAT SOUNDED? DO YOU!YOU MADE HIM BOTH THE SWEET LOVING INNOCENT BOY WHO HAS THESE BURSTS OF COURAGE FOR HIS FRIENDS AND COMPLETELY TERRIFYING! AMAZING! AND YOU WRITING HIS SPEECH OUT PHONETICALLY IT WAS BOTH ADORABLE AND BROUGHT A WHOLE OTHER LEVEL TO THE CHARACTER PROFILE IT WAS AMAZING!
I WOULD CHAPTER BY CHAPTER COMMENT ON THIS MOTHER FUCKING GOD DAMN PIECE OF ART BUT JESUS TAP DANCING CHRIST, IT WOULD PROBABLY TAKE YEARS AND ANNOY YOU EVEN MORE THEN I AM NOW. YOU HAVE WRITTEN AN AMAZING STORY, UTTERLY BRILLANT AND WELL CRAFTED, IT STAYS TRUE TO THE CHARACTERS AND THEIR DEVELOPMENT UNFOLDS NATURALLY AND WITHOUT SEEMING FORCED, THE PLOT IS WELL THOUGHT OUT AND CREATIVE, YOUR USE OF DICTION IS SUPERB, OH MY GOD AND YOUR ABILITY TO END CHAPTERS IS A TALENT IN ITSELF. IT LEFT YOU WITH ENOUGH TO FEEL SATISFIED BUT EAGERLY WAITING FOR MORE EVERY SINGLE TIME, AND DEAR GOD DO YOU EVEN COMPREHEND THE AMAZINGNESS THAT IS YOUR ENDING TO THIS STORY, HOW IT SENDS CHILLS UP YOUR SPINE AS IT ALSO LEAVES YOU WITH A FEELING OF WARMTH AND AFFECTION BUT AN UNDERLYING CHILL OF ICE AT THE SAME EXACT MOMENT!
YOUR STORY LEAVE US WITH A MYRIAD OF FEELINGS THAT INDELIBLY LEAVES A LASTING IMPRESSION ON US AND HAS US PATIENTLY WAITING FOR THE SEQUEL.
| s u n n y 6/8/11 . chapter 23
I started reading this around 9pm. It is now 6:20am. I haven't slept. I couldn't stop reading. And I'm not like Tweek - I need a good nine hours sleep before I can get up for the day, and then I usually like to nap when I get home. I am the complete opposite of Tweek in fact - I don't do late nights/early mornings. I would have woken up fifty minutes ago, not still be too pumped to fall asleep. My vision blurred around chapters eighteen and nineteen, but I had a disgusting wheat cracker to shut my stomach up and let me focus again. My mum woke up twenty minutes ago and came out to find me still up, and I forgot my sister was home so with her up I started openly talking to myself and I yelped when I thought it wasn't really Craig in the last chapter. Three times. And I'm the girl that laughs at horror movies, and sometimes at real things too, like when her friend tells her that her (the friend's) best friend is going blind. Not joke, I laughed for like twenty minutes, which probably makes me a really horrible person. But I flinched multiple times throughout reading this. The whole thing, in one night. I have absolutely /never/ seen Creek done better. You should actually seriously be a horror writer. Granted, it may have been hunger, sleep deprivation and a newly-found but unhealthy love of this couple, in addition to loving morbid romances and being generally f*cked up (don't know if it'll remove this comment if I don't censor...), but I was seriously on the edge of my seat from it. The mouth full of gore and the upside-down bird? Genius. I am in complete and utter awe.
This story was completed last year I think, and I haven't checked yet so I don't know whether or not you have written the sequel. But I am going to check as soon as I'm finished writing this, and I am book-marking this story. If you have any doubt that should continue writing the sequel, I hope this dispels that, because I will most definitely be watching.
It is now 6:30am. I am going to check for a sequel, then go to bed and dream of beautiful and luscious Creek-related visions. And when I awake, probably some time tonight, I'm going to come back out and start reading that sequel that I so desperately hope I am going to find.
Sweet, bloody Creek filled dreaming