|Reviews for Tension Tighter Than A Loaded Gun|
| Spice of Life 2/18/10 . chapter 2
I fucking love this! Please update again soon!
| trulybliss08 2/18/10 . chapter 2
Oh that was good! I like the way you have craig needing to be needed lol I look forward to the next chapter where in apparently some drama will be going down.
so this is prob not it, but is the thing thats missing that Craig doesn't think about how Tweek feels about him ... wait no I think that was in there. hm its sex isn't it, there is no graphic sex in this chapter lol there are mentions of thing leading to it and what happened after but no down and dirty boot knocking. lol w/e
| AvalonParadise 2/18/10 . chapter 2
is it clyde and token? is it? huh? huh?
& yay the penut gallery was sort of there ;)
| RisaShootingStar 2/18/10 . chapter 2
Jeez Craig. There's a difference between love and lust you know? You better get through to your thick head which it is before Tweek runs off to someone else.
WHERE THE FUCK ARE THOSE GNOMES? WE NEED THE GNOMES! T.T
I think my favorite Point of View is Tweek's. The paranoia is surely devouring him alive. It makes wonderful plot and drama. UPDATE! UPDATE SOON. Trust me, you'll totally get 5 reviews for this chapter.
Tweek's the crazy psycho one. Craig's the suicidal emotional one. IT BALANCES! I think I'll make my fanart for the next chapter.
| yaoilover1013 2/17/10 . chapter 1
Woo-hoo! I loved it. And u were way right: the beginning is REALLY raunchy.
| AvalonParadise 2/14/10 . chapter 1
what, no penut gallery at the end? tsk tsk
i kid, i kid (sort of)
this is a promising story btw ;)
| RisaShootingStar 2/14/10 . chapter 1
HAHAHA. I love it when Tweek has mental issues and hear voices in his head. That's a win.
I'm eager to read some more of this! I still think I like The Damned and The Forgotten more, but yeah. Maybe i'll draw a fan art for THIS story because CREEK is my OTP.
| Fanficitonlover4allfiction 2/14/10 . chapter 1
Yay! RAPE! 3 /
Oh, I'm 15 can I still read it :D?
oh wait what SP story :D?
OHP grammar mistake, too lazy to find the paragraph, actually it's not even grammar, I'm not sure what it is called.
"It was the type of voice someone would use to calm down a frightened animal, and the first thing Tweek had taught Craig he needed to calm down."
It's the second half, I guess it would either be inconsistency in tense or you could add words xD, such as for when or if. xD
ON WITH READING!
5th paragraph from the bottom, 4th sentence, should be He'd not He's :'D
WHAT'S HIS SECRET
And the smex was good
(OMG THAT TOTALLY DIDN'T SOUND LIKE WE HAD IT :'D)
OMG THE UNDERPANTS ARE SO OBNOXIOUS! I SWEAR!
I understand Tweek's pain :'D
| EpicInTheLibrary 2/14/10 . chapter 1
AH WHAT'S THE SECRET DD:
GFSFGFFGSKLDHJ:ASDKJ ff sorry this just seems like such an epic idea and i wan't to know mmore...
but i'll be patient. See, I'm good like that. xD
| trulybliss08 2/14/10 . chapter 1
great way to start a story :P I look forward to where this is going, and if you ever need to talk it out, lemme know, I love to help!