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DragonAceSg7 4/1/13 . chapter 1A good use of calling in late, nice. |
Wicked42 1/29/13 . chapter 1Ha! Love that she forgot Valentines Day. I love fics that let her brush off the standard "important" parts of a relationship and leave room for just the two of them, having fun. :D Only thing I'd recommend when editing is that the block paragraphs at the beginning kind of deter me from the rest of the story. I keep reading because I know it's going to get good, but I like short openings, like dialogue, that I can get into without having a ton of backstory pushed at me. That said, I totally understand that this is 3 years old, and you've undoubtedly improved by leaps and bounds since then. Which means I should watch out, because by now I'm sure you're a thousand times the writer I am. XD Great job! 3 |
Guest 8/24/12 . chapter 1 How did I not know that you wrote some stories for the Unusuals? So Awesome! I love this so much, you have no idea! |
DonStella 2/18/10 . chapter 1cool story i like it. |
CaRiNeSs 2/15/10 . chapter 1Aww..that was too cute! Funny how she forgot it was Valentine's day... loved how he didn't though and made her a normal breakfast! Great job...post more of these soon! |