There were a few typos, the plot was somewhat rushed. But other than that, I quite like this story.
I especially like how you describe Roland and Mattias being 'different' yet 'similar'. You provided a neat explanation for Fatima's initial hesitation and gradual acceptance. 7/10. Keep it up.

You may have converted me to RolandxFatima, haha. It was pretty good. You described her emotions well. (:

whoa... Isn't Fatima like 25 and Roland 16? Still, it is a good pairing (even if it's not what the developers made as a pairing...). MORE! PLZ!

danm,well,its the only fanfiction of them in the whole site...and i agree,fatimeow didn't like matias that way...GO ROLAND

I'm not a fan of this pairing... Seriously Fatima is too old for Roland and in the game he develops more with Althea. I'm also rooting for that pairing since I like the main hero going with the main heroine... But it is nice... (I know I talk a lot) Write more!XD

At first, I thought that Fatima is in love with Mattias, so she with Roland. Hmm

Ii desuyo

Jaa,

Kyou Kionkitchee.