hm... interesting.

Words cannot express how much I love this idea!
All things considered I'm surprised how little of a reaction to Haku's death Naruto seemed to have, I never realized that until you pointed it out.
Yang-chan doesn't really as an aspect of Naruto doesn't really work, I think Dark-Naruto is what Naruto saw himself potentially becoming if he lost control(he never saw himself giving up the jumpsuit). Now if Yang-chan was a autonomous or semi-autonomous collection of the Kyuubi's chakra feed the part's that would normally create D-Naruto...
Hmm, I like the idea that Naruto can create chakra constructs on his own, that said something like that is implied to be extremely difficult and chakra consuming in canon never mind that it acts as a beacon for miles around.

As always I look forward to your next update!

Hmm...with how shes flirting with him,you may wanna go for teaching him the full Yin Yang release. He already learned to give the chakra form using the chakra arm...so now he just has to work on doing the rest...then he could even give Naruko a real form.

besides,how often do we get Naruto fucking his dark half?XD

Hmmm, I would really like to see more of this some time. It has the potential to make a halfway decent story.

this part is awesome i would love to see this continued

Very cool premise. Liked it a lot.

This has the potential to become a truly epic story. Hope someone decides to write it!

While my suspension of disbelief struggles with the premise in general I do enjoy the thought of bleeding and ritually sacrificing captured Death Eaters.
I think I would have an easier time imagining Norse rather than Mesoamerican Harry

cool! this chapter its awesome (CH.46) ! can you make a fic, of this chapter?

It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.

Uncle Sam vs Death eaters? Lol

do you know if anyone has attempted to write a full story for chapter 29. if so can you please tell me the person who has started such I wish to read it as what you have here is a very good start.

I actually wish to see this story develope into a full length feature. I love what you have. do you know if anyone has actually taking this chapter 17 story and attempted to write it out.

Wait if johann arcs is adopted and is formerly harry then who was sorted as harry potter.

Very interesting piece. Would love to see more of this.