|Reviews for Scrapbook|
| JPElles 5/4/13 . chapter 47
| Still Not Dead Yet 5/3/13 . chapter 47
Words cannot express how much I love this idea!
All things considered I'm surprised how little of a reaction to Haku's death Naruto seemed to have, I never realized that until you pointed it out.
Yang-chan doesn't really as an aspect of Naruto doesn't really work, I think Dark-Naruto is what Naruto saw himself potentially becoming if he lost control(he never saw himself giving up the jumpsuit). Now if Yang-chan was a autonomous or semi-autonomous collection of the Kyuubi's chakra feed the part's that would normally create D-Naruto...
Hmm, I like the idea that Naruto can create chakra constructs on his own, that said something like that is implied to be extremely difficult and chakra consuming in canon never mind that it acts as a beacon for miles around.
As always I look forward to your next update!
| Reishin Amara 5/3/13 . chapter 47
Hmm...with how shes flirting with him,you may wanna go for teaching him the full Yin Yang release. He already learned to give the chakra form using the chakra arm...so now he just has to work on doing the rest...then he could even give Naruko a real form.
besides,how often do we get Naruto fucking his dark half?XD
| god of stuff 5/3/13 . chapter 47
Hmmm, I would really like to see more of this some time. It has the potential to make a halfway decent story.
| Ranmaleopard 4/29/13 . chapter 2
this part is awesome i would love to see this continued
| JPElles 4/25/13 . chapter 46
Very cool premise. Liked it a lot.
| Goldrune09 4/25/13 . chapter 46
This has the potential to become a truly epic story. Hope someone decides to write it!
| Still Not Dead Yet 4/23/13 . chapter 46
While my suspension of disbelief struggles with the premise in general I do enjoy the thought of bleeding and ritually sacrificing captured Death Eaters.
I think I would have an easier time imagining Norse rather than Mesoamerican Harry
| Lord Mortensen 4/23/13 . chapter 46
cool! this chapter its awesome (CH.46) ! can you make a fic, of this chapter?
| karthik9 4/23/13 . chapter 46
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
| Noir Detective 3/20/13 . chapter 26
Uncle Sam vs Death eaters? Lol
| Toby860 3/1/13 . chapter 29
do you know if anyone has attempted to write a full story for chapter 29. if so can you please tell me the person who has started such I wish to read it as what you have here is a very good start.
| Toby860 3/1/13 . chapter 17
I actually wish to see this story develope into a full length feature. I love what you have. do you know if anyone has actually taking this chapter 17 story and attempted to write it out.
| Toby860 3/1/13 . chapter 14
Wait if johann arcs is adopted and is formerly harry then who was sorted as harry potter.
| JPElles 2/18/13 . chapter 45
Very interesting piece. Would love to see more of this.