   Athenafrodite 1/24/12 . chapter 1Aww it was lovely :) and really well written, good job! |
| Lizzie The Mongoose 1/21/12 . chapter 1 Love it! Yes, Ed, you ARE in love with her. |
| DeathBySugarCube 8/9/11 . chapter 1 THIS
IS
GOOD! |
| Victoria Elric 6/10/11 . chapter 1 SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE LOVE IT |
| InevitableConfusion 4/19/11 . chapter 1 Aww, so adorable! I loved it!
By the way, I really like your writing style :) |
| aej325 11/14/10 . chapter 1 Heeeeeeeeee :D
That was cute! |
| LiveLikeNeverBefore 8/17/10 . chapter 1 This.
Was.
Awesome.
I love how nervous Ed seems about all this haha! So definitely him! |
| Elise-san 8/1/10 . chapter 1 This.
Was.
Good.
it was really ed-ish to freak out like that _ |
| Angel21217 7/19/10 . chapter 1 You could definitely imagine this happening in , Ed's face is all nervous and a drop of sweat is running down his head and he is starring at Winry and Al has his cheeky grin even though you can't see it you know its there... L LUV IT. |
| Aslickain Kiant 4/8/10 . chapter 1 that's good! and ur right, 53 stories...! congrats, i luved this story! |
| Firework's Feelings 4/5/10 . chapter 1 Oh Luv Edward Elric and Vic M. This story is REALLY good. I can picture my Edward being embarrass of something Winry done. Even with a simple gesture :) |
| emichii 4/1/10 . chapter 1 i had plenty of fun reading your story too! :) great job! good characterization, funny, cute and believable! hooray! |
| Kyrara 3/23/10 . chapter 1 Ah, the end... it was hilariously humourus. And the rest was really cute, just the image... And a speechless Ed, which would surely be a first. |
| Professor of Pig-latin 3/5/10 . chapter 1 hehe.. very cute! a lil cheesey, but still good! XD |
| It's Just Alex-nyan 3/1/10 . chapter 1 kawaii _
I
LOVE
IT
XD 3 |
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