HARRY POTTER HAS BLACK HAIR YOU TWIT! NOT BROWN!

Heh heh.

Good story.

Whoops.. try again.

u suk

this suks

stop writing

u r the worst writer on the face of the earth

this is merely a mary jane facfiction

like all ur others, this is terrible and it suks

that was pretty retarded. not to mention the fact that harry has black hair. it was also a really bad play on the 2nd book. i tell u this from one author 2 another (or at least from one author to a wannabe) i think u should work on ur writing b4 u post it, cuz that had no depth and no plot either. it wuz more of a character description from a different POV than a story. sorrie-try again

You suck. This story sucks. What happened to 30 seconds of my life? Stop writing, forever. You will never make it, as an author or human being. Give up now.

Good! But Harry has black hair.

tee hee. It's cute. But it's kind of confusing in some parts and short. Well keep up the great work!

Heh heh, oh, Ginny. Having just become a Harry Potter fan myself,

I was eager to read this fic. I like the way you portrayed Ginny's

thoughts about Harry. Do you really think Hermione likes him though?

I think he ought to get with Cho Chang... :) Anyway, very good, you

should write more Harry Potter fanfics!

first of all, harry's hair is black, not brown (hel-lo?). and ginny is so shallow! she likes harry only because he's cute - oh wait, no, she was 'struck by Cupid's arrow'.How was this fanfic anything but a bad rewrite of a couple chapters of Chamber of Secrets? It sounded a bit like a soap opera/sweet valley twins book.

p.s. Why did she 'flit'? isn't flitting what butterflies do?

Awww kawaii that was sweet!

Really cute!

Harry does NOT have BROWN hair! That wasn't very good.I always pictured him being really good looking, not like how he looks on the covers of the American editions. I think Mary GrandPre's artwork stinks! I'm a really good artist, so I know what I'm talking about! I can draw people, animals, EVERYTHING better than she can!

that's it! How could u leave it just like that. well, I luv h/g fics, n I HOPE (pretty please) that u'd write some more in the near future!

Why does she love Harry? The ending was stupid. Write another part and make it better.

aah...a ginny one was kinda cool ;) as for the last part where ginny thinks that herm has a crush on harry..well all i can say about that is that,HERM has to go with RON! anyway,i really like fics with ginny in it,so keep writing more 'k ;)