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colourfulchatterbox 6/14/11 . chapter 1
I was kinda expecting that...but I have been reading so many threesome stories I was kind of expecting them to be bi...:P

Poor Alice :( But this Edward is awesome...the kind of gay best friend I wish I had :D
twi nana 5/18/11 . chapter 1
oh my god, to funny, loved it!
Siriusmunchkin 4/21/11 . chapter 1
Certainly different. Funny and sorta cute.
lauramelinda 11/11/10 . chapter 1
Loved this! Especially the part with Edward at the end.
LittlePixieCullen88 8/1/10 . chapter 1
OMG Noooooooooo!

this has happened to me too, this ULTRA hot HUGO BOSS model starts getting all flirty with me at a club, then 30mins later he's making out with another guy. I just about died.

Such a shame to do this to Alice and Jasper though! Dude! Loved it though, hysterical ;)
ajt17 6/21/10 . chapter 1
aww, this was cute. I totally loved this. :)
VampChick76 4/7/10 . chapter 1
No! Not Jasper! He was the only sane one left! We all knew Edward was gay though...
TwilightGuru09 3/19/10 . chapter 1
I just had a serious laughfest at poor Alice's expense. The sad part is I can relate because the same thing happened to me in college. God Kevin was so hot!

Ah, the memories and the disappointment. He tried dating to give the impression of being straight and I was a willing victim. Nothing ever came of it but then later that year he came out and I freaked out.

Ah the memories. Maybe that's why I can enjoy this so much. Been there, done that.
Britt01 3/5/10 . chapter 1
Nicely done - very cute, and believable!
ArcadianMaggie 3/1/10 . chapter 1
Poor Alice, misreading the situation so badly. Edward was very sweet to her. I really enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest!
yogacat 3/1/10 . chapter 1
I liked that. It was a snipet of something really nice. It could have been big and messy..but it was perfect.
SnowyHedwig 2/27/10 . chapter 1
Excellent! Good luck in the contest.
blackagurl 2/25/10 . chapter 1
wow i would too!
The Very Last Valkyrie 2/25/10 . chapter 1
My absolute soulmate - who can tell what I'm thinking, who likes everything that I like, who knows me back to front - is gay, so I kind of get where you're coming from. Though I never really cared about him that way, it still sucked when I realised we could never EVER be together.

I loved this - so heartfelt and real.
msashlyjudd8 2/24/10 . chapter 1
wow that would be embarrassing. This story was really sweet, I'm glad Edward found her freaking out and not Jasper.
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