|Reviews for Gethsemane|
| Screen 11/28/11 . chapter 1
"W-why must I die?" I don't think that Jesus was that naive to not no the purpose of his dieing. Other then that I think it was an ok portraylal.
| TrenchcoatsAreSexy 2/18/11 . chapter 1
Wonderfully written, great imagery - good job!
| Amandah Leigh 10/18/10 . chapter 1
I love the way you write. Your descriptive ability and vocabulary are highly impressive. Excellent fix!
| Insanemistosingsmore 8/11/10 . chapter 1
Now, I really admire you for taking on this type of fic. My only question is...if this is based on the musical...wasn't Ted Neely (and whoever played him in the 2000 version) a tenor?
Beautiful imagery in the beginning...but perhaps a bit too much. Yes, you have a gift for describing things...but if you go overboard with it, some might just loose interest in the fic.
| Australian Surmise 2/15/10 . chapter 1
This is an extremely powerful piece of writing.
Your technique with words is exceptional.
I really enjoyed the metaphors you used, especially in regards to blood. You really created wonderful imagery in my mind.
And I don't have any criticism...I think that's a first for me. Great job.
Write more. Explore outside of your Zelda comfort zone. ;)