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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW...this was such a sweet and adorable story, but I am a little confused now: Who was Bant's master now? Kit Fisto or Mace Windu? It's still really really cute. I like Qui-Gon/Obi-Wan, as master-padawan bonding. It's really really good. :)

Awww... very sweet little story. :) I enjoyed the interactions between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, and especially the way Obi-Wan was trying so hard to help his Master. Particularly by putting him (and Bant) to sleep so they wouldn't have to see Tahl's body in the harsh light of the medical room.

I look forward to reading more of your stories!

I take it from your profile and from the date on this story that you are not continuing in the Star Wars fandom.

Just wanted to let you know that I've always enjoyed reading your stories with Qui Gon and Obi-wan, and I thank you for posting what you have to the site. I think you have a good perspective on them, and that you had a good start to this story.

Thanks for the wonderful reads. Best of luck in your other fandoms.

aw :D I was reduced to tears at the end! I love the father/son bond that they have, so this was just so amazing! :D I loved it! :D

Aw, I thought this was so sweet! I like the idea of Tahl visiting Obi-Wan in a dream.

although - did Tahl really visit him, or was he just saying it?

either way, it helped.. :)

-Jaeh

This was sweet! I liked it very much. I just wished something like this was in the books. Oh well, that's what fanfiction is for!

not so bad? IT'S BRILIANT! (or whatever the word is) i really love the story!

p.s. i cant even begin to think of mace windu as a circus clown XD WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

that was great! not mushy at all. it was so sweet.:)

Good job!

very very very good like it i do! lol i love yoda

well i love all the star wars people. anyway very good fic.

I love this book. I really hate Judes' books. The only emotion you see is in #16 when Qui-Gon sets out to fuck everbody. I know that they have to be rate no more then PG, but she is such a bitch about it. I really pisses me off. This is the type of shit that gives a book what it needs. This is one of the best goddam book I seen since The Line. It wound be cool if you wrote more like this. *hinthint* Kept up the good work. :)

Wipeout

coolcoolcool! i luv all uv ur stories!

Ahhhhhhh! That was a sweet ending! (A lot more emotion than the books ever would. ;)

Only ur first star wars fanfic? Write more quick!