Interesting story. Examining Phoebe's businesslike attitude and contrasting it with Gerald's laid back one. Also, I love the thing about Arnold and Helga bickering but still being in love. Also, great job with the sex scene. Very romantic without being raunchy.

This was hot. Love the pairing and love the story. I'm not too much of a fan of the Arnold/Helga pairing, but you did make them realistic. It was funny especially when they were at work. This is definately a favorite.

omg so cute

Great! Sure, this was an M fic, but you wrote it very tastefully, and I do love Gerald and Phoebe's chemistry - they're a couple that isn't explored all that much, so it's refreshing to read about them. You kept them in character too, which was great. It's so easy picturing Gerald as being very sexy XD. Phoebe is one lucky lady.

This fic was beautifully written, and you did a great job with contrasting Gerald and Phoebe's blissful, romantic relationship with Arnold and Helga's stormy one.

How cute! I loved the the intricate plot you weaved into this piece. It's easy to write a smutty piece, especially about a couple as cute as Pheobe and Gerald but you managed to tie in inadequecy, gender roles, guilt and responsibility, turining this into a story about a marriage more than just an update of elemntary characters. I loved how you even incoropated a little of Helga and Arnold's dysfunctional relationship into the story.