Great start. I'm wating for an update.

Interesting concept, hope to see more soon!

guys they have not given up yet. the only reason they have not had enouth sales and it was sadley the most under rated game of year. i dont understand!

U gonna write soon or am I gonna die before chapter 2 comes out.

Please don't quit like the other Metal Arms fan fics (that or it just takes a while to write another chapter for them)! Love the beginning so far!

I LOVE METAL ARMS! I'm so sad that they didn't make a sequel on PS3. That'd be so awesome. Anyway, you're one of five people who have written Metal Arms fanfic so good job :) This game needs to stay alive because it is grossly under-appreciated. Sad that there wasn't much to read so far, though. Keep it up.

P.S. If you're a Bioshock fan, check out my fanfic, Rapture Chronicles: Vol.1. Sorry, don't mean to advertise while complimenting you, but I'm workin really hard on my story and want so good, critical feedback. See ya around