plz write more i love this story

Will the others be joining him here or will he recreate the ideas with the Naruto characters?

that i a very good story. it is very original. please dont stop writing the story. i hope it was ok to add you to my fav authors

Your story is so good please keep writing and don't let anyone discourage you in your journy

I love the freezing! That's my kind of trick.

This is awesome. I love your description of the floo powder opening the tear to the other dimension. That in particular was excellent prose. See you at work.