love jake as uke...wish it was longer...

This is really good & the ending is adorable.

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"Sooooo..." Carlisle said, searching for something to say. Edward and the large wolf had just run off in opposite directions, something confusing to all. All the magical creature looked at each other, Emmett at Rosalie, Alice at Jasper (who was snickering oddly...) and the wolves at each other. "Anyone for some baseball?" he offered hopefully, "It seems there will be a thunderstorm tonight."

Yeah, just wanted to offer that little mini-sequel up. Those things have an annoying habbit of mimicking plot bunnies. I loved your story, especially the fluffy bit at the end. Excellent!

Sooooo good. Such a beautiful story !

I liked this. It seemed a little young at times, but it was good. Thank you.

that was sweet, and dont worry it was a good read ive reveiwed many stories and and i tell the truth when i do it, someimes i do belive i hurt ppls feelings,but this was a very good story. I do belive that this would amke a wonderful chapter story, but that is up you, if you ask my opinion i think you should. well till nextr time bye now.

That was so fucking amazing, I can't believe this story have only a few review, it was amazingly well writen. !

100 stars ! 200 hearts ! 10 lemons !

aww that was adorable at the end

I loved it

this could turn out into a good fic

with the pack and Cullen's clan coming into play

lol not baad not bad at all! :D

a sweet story loved

THAT WAS SO CUTE! LOVED IT!