love it they should get caught by jasper

I am feeling it! Gimme more please! X

please continue. Great plot, nice Carlisle OOC there, BTW! every body like Dr.C :) DILF

omg. that was amazing. i always thought Carlisle was a hot hunk. thanks for the sexy story!

hmmmmmmmmm... NOM

I love this whole 'doctor' fantasy thing, and i can imagine everything thats going on.

Maybe Edward and Esme and the family should swing in soon?

wow! i LOVE the way hes so dominant, hes like the perfect kind of dominant! forget edward and jacob, team carlisle!1

wow! i wish u could make a story out of this..its really good

Love it! You should continue it! :)

amazing :) 3 are you going to add another chapter or is this the end ?

Oh my... *faints* Dominant Carlisle is so very attractive.

I've just come back from seeing Eclipse for the 2nd time, (I blame the doctor and the overload of screentime he had in this movie). And after reading this I might just have to go see it again.

This was a great chapter and you wrote it really well.

Is this story complete or are you planning on writing another chapter?

whoa...just whoa..,

well, i for one hope she does get screwed!

I'm feeling it. lol MORE PLEASE!

I love it can't wait for more!

That was pretty good. But it kind of seemed like there was a lot of build up and then everything kind of ended suddenly. I liked how you stayed close to the characters original personalities so it was more believable.