I agree with Neko-chan i c ur improving in dis 1 -; hm remember u can always ask som1 2 reread 4 u no edit it so u wnt get flames. also jst ask som1 2 read it & edit then send it 2 then though a private message. & well la! u mite get no more flames!:D

Yea uh huh...your getting better not bad...why do i have to lie...NAH I AM KIDDING LOL DON'T YELL AT ME! This is good! You improving i can see!