This is amazing! I wanna know what happens next! Keep up the good work!

Nice :P I like the last bit the most about favoring animals and how she likes him. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Very great story, only concern so far is the grammar, most of it seems to be just a need to proof read. Keep up the great work though and will love to see this story fully written (as in not given up on).

Glad to see the story back.

Thanks. I'm new to the online fandom.

I liked the ending, good job :)

I think that this story is a great story, i have read all of the Carpathian series and I liked this story just as much as the others. I believe that you should contiune to write the story, it has a great plot so far and could go a long way. Great Story!

please please update this update was just amazing, i would love to have the carpathians POV of this though.:)

Awesome story can't wait for next chapter!

I loved this. Can't wait until you make another chapter for the story! That was !

great chapter she has so much control wonder what would happen now that the council knows about there connection.

this is amazing i feel as if im reading one of the books, the character ciara is awesome a real kick ass lady and funny loved the amazon speech she showed him please write more cant wait excited to read the next chapter very well written and interesting plot!

I am really liking this syory but i hope you don't make Siara to weak She needs to deal with Zacharias and his caveman nonsence.

Nail bitting clifthanger!Good story, can't wait for next chapter

I love this story! I was so extatic when I found out you updated! thank you! and keep going!