So sweet :')

Please update. I can understand Gaara now.

this is very nicely written.

i really loved it.

i especially liked the scene where gaara's going crazy with shukaku and temari hugs him (managing not to die in the process). it's really great.

the one where temari is giving the mission is wonderful too. she's completely in character and she's got a this resolve that's just amazing.

great job! :)

I have to admit that at first I thought 'C'mon, there's a ton of these' - but yours is different.

And especially the last part. *gives virtual cookies*