I'd been wondering, during the last few chapters, why the hunted didn't just find the break in the wall where the driveway entered the property and then escape that way. Now, I can visualize the wall connecting with the house itself, on both sides, totally encompassing the side yards and backyard. From that, I take it the only way off the property was through the front door or the front garage. So, thanks for answering that...it stood out like a gaping plot hole until this chapter! Good story; but I believe a sequel would be good as well.

Great chapter!

"You're making a big mistake," he said. "Do you think it wise to play with a vampire?"

"No," Bella straightened up, "but it's funny as hell."

Considering the grave situation and the nature of this story, I love Bella's comeback here!

This should have been posted at Halloween for a contest!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I was looking for a good horror fic since forever and it seems like I found it. I read this little story overnight!

Your Edward is above depraved, but he still appears same in his insanity. And Bella is not just a helpless, romantic lamb. Although too innocent at first, she quickly redeems herself.

I wouldn't mind if the story ended here, but since you kind of promised us a sequel, I will be watching...

You are officially on my radar ;)

Mary

Wow, dark and twisted! Love it. So Emmet was changed and maybe Bella was slated to be changed too? "Added to the establishment". She'll keep Edward from being bored! Haha

This story was perfect until I got to the end. I actually hate cliff hangers, and not knowing what happened at the end has actually ruined the story for me. That's going to wind me up for a while now, which is even more frustrating considering the time I spent reading it.

I dont get it. Does Bella survive or not?

wow your utterly amazing your story forced me to review which i never do

ahhhhhhhh so scary but asome and sad wish 4 a happy ending

you have a dark and twisted mind...cant wait for more :)

I read this a couple of years ago & loved it, which is why I added to my favorites. :)

you write such crazy, beautiful, twisted stories! I loved this one! xx

This story is really good I just love it. I would really like to know what happens with Bella. Please :D

So creepy how much he loves and enjoys the games.