Oh it's so horrible that he had to wait until he was in his late 60's early 70's before it had to happen! Then again, maybe in a Karmic way, that was his penance for calling out Lily's name during their lovemaking. Not a good way to keep a girl!

That was sweet, sad, and adorable. Great story :)

Gosh...that was lovely. I nearly cried at one point but I choked it back to finish reading. Absolutely perfect.

That was terribly sad for them. Hope they enjoy the rest of their years in peace and in love!

Bittersweet and lovely.

Yay! More fabulous writing! I don't know what kind of muse you've got, but hang on to him/her! A beautiful short story- really, really lovely.

xx

Oh, how sad. But at least it ended well.

this is a beautiful and poetic piece.

made me cry. 3

poor Severus, you did an excellent job making him tragic.

I thought I reviewed this the first time I read it. It's wonderful. It's an extremely poetic piece too. I love the way you've told the story. You can feel each of those years dragging at the heels of Snape. Beautiful job, beautiful resolution.

Cheers!

RV

Love it. Very interesting.

Oh, mah gosh... That was just tear jerking. Happy it ended somewhat happily, but what a horrible thing to have to endure. Poor man, as if he hadn't endured enough. It's too bad Ron didn't suffer more for what he did. Hopefully he had nightmares every night about Hermione never truly loving him. And yes, I'm that vindictive. Mwahahahaha! Five stars, my dear, as usual.

I love your Snape! So grey and straight-backed walking alone in the rain, such a romantic faithfulness! Im glad you cut him some slack in the end )

It was beautiful and it made me cry.

35 years? Even in the wizarding world that was a long,long time. Lyrical and lovely. Thank you.

I love it alot but what exactly did Ron do to him?