Okay, well I'm not going to sit here and beg you to update because I know how sucky writer's block is, but I AM going to tell you that I absolutely LOVE this story and that I really hope that, some day, you decide to continue it.

I love the idea of Vanitas being the fourth apprentice and I really like how you incorporated him into this...it's like you've managed to paint him in a humane light without losing the snarky, darkish characterization that makes him, well, him. And everyone else feels spot on, even Master E, who I imagine is a somewhat difficult character to write. You have a way with describing scenes that really sucks the reader in and makes them forget that they're reading a fanfic! Everything feels so realistic...well, as realistic as it can feel in the KH universe. :D

As far as a love rectangle goes, I personally don't see Ven with Aqua, unless it's more in a cute, one-sided crush kind of way. And I can see both your Terra AND your Vanitas duking it out for her affections, although I typically view Terra as more of the oblivious-when-it-comes-to-feelings type (and having Aqua being the one pining after him, lol). Vanitas, on the other hand, I can see as being all smooth and romantic, so my guess is that it was him who gave her the rose...all in all, I'm curious as to who she'll end up with...

So no pressure/whining/annoying antics from me, but just know that someone out there is still reading, enjoying, and hoping you continue this story...eventually. XD You definitely have a lot of talent though, so regardless of whether it's for the KH fandom or other things, keep up the awesome writing!

I really hope you update this soon. I'm LOVING this story! !

Loved your story! Especially when Vanitas messed with Terra.

This is an awesome story! I would LOVE to see more. Please continue!

LBWind

Very interesting and hilarious. Can't wait to see more of it.

And again, awesome, amazing, wonderful story. And I don't think I'll beg you to update. Yet. I love the way you portray the different and unique personalitys, from Vens carefree happiness to Vanitus'... Sarcasm? Darkness? I'm not really sure how to describe it. But love it all the same, even if he's not my favorite character (I like Ven) as well as Aquas' thoughtful intelligence and Terras' strength. And the oh-so-obvious feelings he has for Aqua. :) I dunno about the love rectangle, but keep it up! It just might work!

:3

FFFF...I love thisa story XD

I'm not a big fan of Terra in general or Vanitas for that matter so you should feel quite accomplished that this story is making me feel something other than "meh" of "D:" towards them.

Though, personally I think Aqua should end up with Ven b/c he's the only male with any sense 'round these parts. Plus I think it'd be hilarious for him to sweep in at the last second while Vanitas and Terra are vying for her affections.

i like ur story! i cant wait till u update

Now THIS is gonna be good! I can't wait to see where you send them!

how are you? XD i haven't been on in so long- glad to see you're still writing ;) this story is good, trust me. -

"G-G-Girl?" Ven chimed whilst batting his eyelashes, catching on, though he meant the teasing in only harmless fun. this part made me laugh. XD

i hope to see an update soon :D

this is a great story; i'm glad you updated after a while, actually- and no, it's not terrible at all! - you portray their personalities very well, too! i'd love to see updates soon.

It's an update :D!

This wasn't bad at all, I mean, it's better than what I do anyways. To the story, I wonder where the group would go?

OH MY GOD I AM SO SO SOOOOO SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING THE KEYBLADE WARS! I TAKE FULL BLAME FOR THE LACK OF UPDATES. D8

UUUUGH OK I REALLY NEED TO GET TO THAT.

/caps

Ok. ufffff. Yeah. KW was gonna get a rewrite, but with school and everything else getting in the way (UGH, whyyy is AP Art such a pain in the BUTT?) I haven't really had time to work on it at all D: I'm sorry. XC

I'll see if i can update before the month ends, just so we can both get our stories moving again...

I like this chapter, by the way. Dunno what I like about it, i kinda just... DO. XD

UnVeRsEd

Dude, this story isn't a piece of crap as you call it in your author's note, it's wonderful. I really enjoy reading it, since you have such awesome portrayals of all the characters. - I hope you keep on updating it!

XD ah, nothing like fresh update in the morning...Another nice chappie, another new year, lol on a dazing-off-into-nowhere Aqua, and you totally reminded me of Villain of a Sort again with the healing stuff XD Keep it up! I shall update soon enough...hopefully...