Wow these are long chapters. I'll have to read this when I have some time on my hands :) But I WILL read it!

HI. I loved your story because I agree that Starfleet would not pardon the Maqui and would not be happy with Janeway. I also thought it was perfect for you to create a traitorous cell within Starfleet to force Janeway to realize the blind faith and mistakes she had made in the name of an organization that not only turned against her crew but also was corrupt at the highest levels.

If you are still updating the story then I have a few comment. First of all, I would love another chapter. I would love to see the entire voyager crew go rouge. It would follow with Janeway's destruction of the array and her complete dedication to her crew. None of the crew seems to have a home in the AQ and all seem to wish they had remained in DQ.

There are also a few details in the story that are incorrect/missing. Janeway, like Chakotay, saw her father die (and her then fiance, Justin. Janeway was in a Cardassian prison when she was an Ensign - not Admiral Paris was held with her. Final note regards Seska - I might have read that part of the story too quickly, but is she back?

Great story, man. It was put together well, and well written. Though some parts were long-winded, the story was really great. There was one other thing I didn't like though, and that was Tom's interaction with Janeway. She seemed unsympathetic and harsh ALL of the time.

- Otherwise, great job. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter...I hope nobody gets killed.

Seema, wonderful story as usual

Wow. When is the sequel being posted?

Wonderful. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I wish I could be more eloquent, but it is now 2:30 in the morning; there was no way in hell I was going to bed before it was finished. I look forward to your sequel!

Wow! One hell of a good story. Please post "A Fugue in Blue Minor." soon. I loved all the relationships scenes between Tom and B'Elanna and Janeway and Chakotay.