Chapter one was a touch confusing?

I love this so far! I don't have time for a long review (which you deserve) but I'll definitely be here to read more when you update!

-laughandlove

Aww I liked seeing Lassie as a kid:D Anyways, UPDATE!

If you get the chance, you should continue this, I am curious to see where it goes

Good Chapter

This story is pure genious! Please update soon!

Hi, jewel here...

Well...my sister accidentally left her "ray-ray" account signed in earlier, and I just left *my* review from hers...*blush* Sorry about that. I still love the story! :D

O.o

Thank you for more so quickly :) Though considering the heart attack you've just given me, you *may* end up owing me a new defibrillator ;). Shawn bleeding out...well, it tends to cause heart problems in impressionable readers like myself ;). But seriously, I love it. Oh, and this bit...

"He told the EMTs he was fine... to make sure that the girl got all the attention he felt she deserved."

...totally Shawn. Perfect.

More soon please; my heart can only take so much suspense! O:)

Ok Shawn is WAY to cute! :) He'd do anything for Jules! :) UPDATE! :D

Wow.

Intense, maybe. Ridiculous? No way. This is *so* good, I would love to see you continue it; I'm very curious now. More please O:)

cute! :) update!

I do like the Shule of it all, but to be honest, it was rather confusing.

And Short. I really hate the cliffy at the end.

It was good. It could have used a little more detail, just to help clear up the story.

Other than that, I really enjoyed it.

it's so very much different from the standard Shules stories, in a very good way! Loved it! Though I'm deeply curious about that guy now and how it'd continue! Sequel? Prequel? Both? :D