OH MY GOD! I almost had fricken' hearts when i read the proposal to Risa! Amazing! Please continue writing! Oh- and the punchline was really funny too!

That was adorable mushy and sentimental. And only a moderately small dose. Which is good; because sentiment in large doses is just sickening.

I loved the punchline! And the proposal, a mix of Roy's childishness and Risa's composure. For some reason it's easier to imagine Roy's proposal being far beyond the standards of romance than, not a patterned extract from a romance story.

dont now why its a T ... but beside that great story...

Beyond adorable! Roiai forever! ;P

Oh I LOVE this story!

It's brilliant!

Keep up the good work!

it doesnt really matter how you spell the names... youre the author so it more or less depends on your preference of the spelling. LOVE the story by the way!

Haha cute :D though i was rare to read Risa and think of Riza xD

oh, this is so lovely! I added to fav) Love it, love it, love it!

so cute

Tehe. Cute. I adore it. Well done. Xx.

aw... cute

you know, I much prefer Risa as RIZA. Somehow, Risa doesn't fit.

(ignoring your A/N's)

This would be a lot easier to read it you spelled Riza's name correctly.