Hey, I do love this story - I'm up to c25 after all, but seriously, you over use the word 'pray' so much.. there's only so much praying I can take... you must have used it a dozen times in the last chapter alone. How often to people say 'I pray this happens' or 'I pray you're ok' out loud? And as an offshoot of that, 'praytel' is not a word... and there's quite a bit of that in the story. I know you posted this a few years ago, so maybe your writing style has matured, but I did check through a few pages of reviews to see if anyone mentioned it, and they hadn't so I thought I would. I do love the bosco peril so I am in this for the long haul. Must be the longest fic I ever read! X

Wow great story. THanks so much for posting!

Wow 60's chapters in two days...I got no sleep, but this story was worth it. Thanks for the great job!

*Claps* Great story! I loved it! OMG I love a Bosco and Faith story. _ This seriously was great. Thank you so much for a great read!

Wow what a great ending. You did an amazing job with this story, even though it was a senstive issue. Great job.

hello i read this story in 1 day and i love it i cry i laught and this story with all the horrible think in it, it very beautiful story so i want to thank you for this and hope you writ another story with more happinesse lol

i am a b/f shipper and thank again for this story lol

see ya

Hey,

Wow, kind of intense. Do you have it in for Bosco or something because he seems to find his way into every possible life threatening situation. Jk. Just a suggestion; you use the word "mean" A LOT in the story. Its a really intense and amazing story and the word "mean" kinda takes away from the story. KEEP WRITING!

-Audrey

You are so right! This was the ultimate Bosco angst fanfic! One thing that touched my heart, was the amazing child, Billy Hathaway. I cried whenever he died. The other thing that made this story great was the Faith/Bosco pairing...this pairing made the story wonderful. This story is currently added into my favorites list...lol...well anyway thanks for the great story that touches hearts and changes lives.

SarahP3

Beautiful but sad last chapter! *sniffs* Awsome job!

You've done a fantastic job! I loved it! Sad it's over!

I still can't belive it's over...good story and i hope to read more of your other stories...thank you for finally updating...

Wow...this was an amazing chapter...an amazing story while I'm at it. It flowed so well and this chapter nearly had me in tears. You are a great writer.

Ashley

Wow. I'm impressed. Two years of writing to finish this. That's dedication & it was well worth it. This was a very well written story. I have to admit I had forgotten about it some time ago and only now re-read it & remembered it. Very good story. Very well developed characters and the story had plenty of plot, action & drama to keep the reader interested to the end. Great job.

I am hooked! I love this story, despite the darkness of the story. Hope you write some more of these types of stories.

I seriously shouldn't read this story during school...I'm like tearing up now as I write this review. Thank God this is a free period.

This ending was just beatiful. Thank you for a wonderful story that entertained me at my lowest points in life.