In the Heaven Tear's name, you have a vivid imagination. Not being descriptive, ey... :) it is wonderful. And also a good propaganda LOOL... kidding of course.

Keep up the good writing.

Hi there :D was just browsing through and was surprised to notice that there was a section for pw. Even more surprised to see the name 'Kinetic' in the descriptors. I'm a member of prodigy :3 I was there when kinetic and prodigy merged. Loor was a friend. Please...if at all possible, I'd like to know what happened to loor and lordmagister.

But heartfelt greetings aside, great work with the writing. I love that you put so much detail into your story, even remembering the duke blacke npc and his pieces of weird trivia. liked it and subscribed :)

omg, awesome.

great potential to be a VERY VERY VERY good pw fic.

KEEP GOING!

Hey there! Nice story, and I really do like the way you describe everything including the thoughts of your character. I'll be looking out for this one.