...Wow...

That stung. Both in a good way in a bad way, because I love these guys (even Brawn). So naturally it stabbed me in the heart, but I really did like it! It just PAINS me to read it! But that's okay because it takes good literature to provoke emotions like that.

...Poor Hot Shot

I'm glad Brawn fgured out what he had done, but it was too late. That was sad.

The ending of it was great, but unfortunately I found myself associating it with Sousuke's mom telling his dad to B-U-G O-F-F from Ponyo so I only got to feel the impact for a second. But that was my fault not yours.

This story is really good. Hot Shot is one of my favorite characters. Yay, for the JaAm reference. I hope you write a sequel to it to explain how the teams deals with it.

OC: HOTSHOT! NO! (starts crying silently)

Me: There, there sweetie (hugs oc)

This fic is bittersweet but I still like it.

Not gonna mention who my oc is yet;)