Reviews for The Half Vampire Chronicles: Part III
wildthing7508 2/21/10 . chapter 2
Great chapter. I love the house. I just hope somehow those rooms get filled and not with wolfpack members or other guests. Can't wait to see what drama Leah can come up with. I hope Nessie gets her revenge. Can't wait to see what happens next! Hurry up with the next chapter!
twiggy31 2/21/10 . chapter 2
Love it! Is there going to be stuff about Nessies attack things soon?
rach92 2/21/10 . chapter 2
o...leahs cumin bac...

major drama...lol

update soon
LemonsXD 2/21/10 . chapter 1
awesome chapter .. im sure this is gonna be the best one yet cant wait to see what happes next xD
mrslautner28 2/21/10 . chapter 2
Good job as always. I'd like Jake and Nessie to find out she can have babies after all but let her and Jake enjoy their time first.
ooohbeee 2/21/10 . chapter 2
That's just so wonderful that Leah is returning to Forks. I know she will stir up some trouble that's for sure. I noticed somethingin this chapter does Seth still have a thing for Nessie? Will Seth & Leah try something? Very interesting to say the least. I know you don't have to answer back if that's where your going with this story it's just a thought. Love this story can't wait for your next update! Ohbe
DamonSalvatorelover789 2/21/10 . chapter 2
LEAH AGAIN CAN'T SHE JUST LEAVE EVERYBODY ALONE! I LOVE YOUR STORY WRITE MORE SOON!:}
Efficient Vixen 2/21/10 . chapter 2
Loved the chapter
luv2beloved 2/21/10 . chapter 2
Liking the continuation!Yep, the house is pretty big, which means a litter of puppies some time (sorry about the dog pun)
Patt 2/21/10 . chapter 1
I felt like that house was made exactly for them..
Jerry 2/21/10 . chapter 1
(: Wow house is beautiful
Twi4lyflovetaylorlaut 2/21/10 . chapter 1
i started reading your stories last week. I love the length of each chapter. It killed me togo to school because i just wanted to keep reading but i knew as soon as i got home, i could start reading. Although i did have some undone hw it was defnintlyworth it. I cant wait for par 3 but it says at the top, part 3 is complete! is i, or will there be more
freckles8943 2/21/10 . chapter 1
Awsome story! I really think that some new characters are going to be needed to fill up that large house of theirs. ;). I also wondered if the connection that Seth had been feeling twoards Nessie meant anything. Anyways, great story, keep writing!
bibliophile360 2/20/10 . chapter 1
omg ahmazing chapter plz uhp date again mi bdaiz on mondai n iht would b an awsome b daii present lolz :D
only me 08 2/20/10 . chapter 1
Good first chapter. Can't wait to see the complications that arrive in this part.
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