This is one cool story! It was a very clever idea to write from different character's POV's; I'm interested to see what happens next. :)

aw. are you going to update soon? P.S. it's pedra not footdra.

Nice start on a good story!

Peach is once agian acting up and Amand's mother is not so happy about it either.

Anyway, keep on the good work!