Great story! Can't wait to read more!

P.S. I finally was able to see all of Chapter 7 today. Great writing. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Hi, I really enjoyed this story. But, unfortunately, chapter seven poops out in mid-sentence just after Shane gets shot. The rest of this obviously exciting chapter doesn't display. Too bad, it was probably as good as the rest.

Beth Palladino

i love the story i cant waight to see what happends next please let me no when u right ur next part to the sory i cant waight to hear it thanks
shelly

I guess if you're a STeve fan its a good story...I just skim long stories for Jesse...sorry not enough Jesse to keep me interested!

Wow. that was magnificant. No more can be said... wow

Awesome story... anxiously waiting the next one.

Great story! Can't wait to read your next one. lol All your characters are super, I hope Jade's parents will be in the next one, too. Just keep writing and soon!

This was another well written story. I hope that the nex one will continue soon.

Another great story, it flowed nicely from start to finish and left me wanting more. Suzi definitely deserves to get her come-uppance! Keep writing.

Tracy

This story was GREAT! I loved it! Just as good as the last one...can't wait to read the next one. The characters are developing wonderfully. I love the story line of Suzy. She's so devious. :) Keep up the great writing.

I am glad that Shane is going to be fine, I think he and Amanda will make a good couple, now we have to wait and see what happens to Jade - and that Suzy female!

Keep writing this is really good, I am enjoying every word.

Tracy

WOW...I'm waiting on more with bated breath...hurry I don't know how long I can hold my breath...LOL

Another great chapter. Don't keep us waiting too long to find out what happens to Shane, I am really getting to like him.

Tracy

This was a brillant story. I hope you write another one soon.