This is an interesting look at Lily's thoughts, and I think you captured her nicely. Well done! :)

I do love the Severus/Lily pairing, they are all so sad. This was sweet, I enjoyed.

Aw, this is really sad ):

But I like it (:

Normally, it's Severus saying "We could have been, but now I've screwed up, we can't" ... it's nice to see Lily saying it instead, for once (:

Aww, thats sad :s Very well written drabble though, very honest insight into their characters.

Kudos to you :D

Mimi x