I really liked how the story was set up and how shy and blushing Edward was. I can just see him act like that.

sigh* i love a nerd Ed ! i did my fair share of rock shows when i was younger.. tham i loved mosh pits

Loved it!

I'm from Seattle. Born here and will die here. Spent much of my 20's downtown at The Showbox and other venues.. My hubs friend Nick played with Layne before he got heavily into drugs...AIC was supposed to open up for PJ and we had tix but sadly, Layne got sick so Candlebox opened instead.. Only saw Layne sing a couple of times for a band called Second Coming... He has a song on their first album that he sings, it's awesome.

Sorry... Got sidetracked in memories there...

Back to your story... Loved it. Loved the musical references... Love that Jasper saved him from getting trampled on. Mish pits are so brutal. Especially in those venues, as the floor is tiny. The place may hold a ton of people but the mosh areas were so small, so that's what I imagined for your story.

I like that Emmett is such an understanding brother.

Great story!

I'm going to continue to make my way through your stories later tonight. I like ExB and ExJ pairings so I'll check those out. ;)

-Tyra

go edward

Oh B, Honey, what an absolutely delish slice of slashy goodness this is! :D

I loved your shy, awkward and darling Edward and his charming, confident and sexy savior Jasper! (AND I especially loved how they so hotly celebrated the birthday boy's special day! Oh yummy!) Wonderfully-descriptive story, I was imagining and enjoying the visions evoked in my head reading your lovely words. :D

Brilliant, BB! I loved it! :D (And, I thought Edward offering Jasper his shirt was a lovely touch!) So sweet!

AW that was so bloody sweet. Thanks hon (Lol, I'm a sucker for fluff)

I loved Jasper saving Edward & even catching his glasses, he was so sweet too.

I really enjoyed this, so thanks again :)

Loved this! I hope you'll write more ;-)

hehe that was amazing! i luved everything about it! very good job! one of my fav couples! EJlove! -

Damn, what a great birthday present!

happy fuckin birthday to me

so, it seems Edward got not just a birthday present, but something more and lasting

lovely, in fact, amazing, and sexy as... our beautiful boys together. my heart if full to the brim when they are happy and united, I can't seem to help myself - no other pairing does that to me

thank you for your awesome story

What a great birthday present both for Edward and SorceressCirce's. :)

I love it! You must continue. I want to know what Edwards first time will be like. And I want to know some more from Jaspers perspective too. Just sayin' Anywho. Loved it!

really yummy and wonderful.

Your first slash? I certainly hope it's not your last! :) I really enjoyed it. Very sexy o/s! Thanks for sharing this with us!