Excellent story! Poor naïve Ed...

This was hilarious! Boy that administrative work sure can cause one to work up a sweat eh? lol, Edward is so naive. bahbah. :)

Ha, this was great! I loved it! I can actually see this happening... I don't have much advice because it's awesome as is _

I'm probably going to spend all weekend reading your stories :D

This is hysterical XD

And it's safe to say I'll never see sodium in quite the same light again XD

Ed is so naive... I love it! xD

Oh, poor, innocent minded Ed. He had absolutely NO idea... But when he looks back on this encounter in the future... surely he'd realize...

This was quite entertaining.

Hihihi, Ed's so cute! He's such a kid sometimes. :)

"classified administration" huh?. I guess you would want it to be classified in this case _-.

Loved Hawkeye's response to Edward's question about Mustang's leg; "overtaxing" and "swollen" LOL. I wonder what Mustang would have to say about that first one though...

Haahahahahaha! That was HILARIOUS! The first part with Ed apparently comparing Amestris' border soldiers to a herd of rheumatic sheep was funny, but it got really good when he showed up at the office. Mustang and Hawkeye were hysterical - I love how Mustang was sweating and looked kind of giddy, and the "Sodium!" shouted by Hawkeye was awesome... Loved Ed's thoughts about alcohol and possible gas leaks, and I really liked the description of Hawkeye's "wet, skittish eyes." I also just realized exactly WHY Mustang was limping when he went out of the office. Man, this was really funny!

Great one shot.

Ah the slowness of ed lol.

I laughed my ass of through this.

I could just picture ed's little rant.

LOL "Fullmetal, can you spare some change? I'm a little short- Oh- wait, so are you!" That made me laugh so hard. xDDDD

I can only imagine what really went on in the office for Hawkeye to be smirking like that.

Too funny! ]

Ha, I'm just reading this for the first time and it is hi-larious! It made me smile :D. I love the 'administration' puns.

:) I think you should this story...in Mustang's perspective. Or Hawkeye's. Poor Ed...can't put two and two together.

great story, i love how oblivious Ed is xD

oh man is ed really that clueless or is he in denial? by the way, i love the wording. its so formal. unlike some of the other junk you can barely read... My jaw hurts from smiling so much at your story :)

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