|Reviews for Overtime|
| jessi 7/26/12 . chapter 1
Excellent story! Poor naïve Ed...
| edwardfiend 5/21/12 . chapter 1
This was hilarious! Boy that administrative work sure can cause one to work up a sweat eh? lol, Edward is so naive. bahbah. :)
| PhoenixNoTreble 2/17/12 . chapter 1
Ha, this was great! I loved it! I can actually see this happening... I don't have much advice because it's awesome as is _
I'm probably going to spend all weekend reading your stories :D
| importance of leather gloves 1/4/12 . chapter 1
This is hysterical XD
And it's safe to say I'll never see sodium in quite the same light again XD
| Starship Artisan 11/8/11 . chapter 1
Ed is so naive... I love it! xD
| Athena's phoenix 8/1/11 . chapter 1
Oh, poor, innocent minded Ed. He had absolutely NO idea... But when he looks back on this encounter in the future... surely he'd realize...
This was quite entertaining.
| Perennial Rhinitis 7/19/11 . chapter 1
Hihihi, Ed's so cute! He's such a kid sometimes. :)
| DarkSakiHanajima 6/6/11 . chapter 1
"classified administration" huh?. I guess you would want it to be classified in this case _-.
Loved Hawkeye's response to Edward's question about Mustang's leg; "overtaxing" and "swollen" LOL. I wonder what Mustang would have to say about that first one though...
| Radon65 6/1/11 . chapter 1
Haahahahahaha! That was HILARIOUS! The first part with Ed apparently comparing Amestris' border soldiers to a herd of rheumatic sheep was funny, but it got really good when he showed up at the office. Mustang and Hawkeye were hysterical - I love how Mustang was sweating and looked kind of giddy, and the "Sodium!" shouted by Hawkeye was awesome... Loved Ed's thoughts about alcohol and possible gas leaks, and I really liked the description of Hawkeye's "wet, skittish eyes." I also just realized exactly WHY Mustang was limping when he went out of the office. Man, this was really funny!
| parris411 5/3/11 . chapter 1
Great one shot.
Ah the slowness of ed lol.
I laughed my ass of through this.
I could just picture ed's little rant.
| By Victoria 1/17/11 . chapter 1
LOL "Fullmetal, can you spare some change? I'm a little short- Oh- wait, so are you!" That made me laugh so hard. xDDDD
I can only imagine what really went on in the office for Hawkeye to be smirking like that.
Too funny! ]
| Lou Nebin 11/16/10 . chapter 1
Ha, I'm just reading this for the first time and it is hi-larious! It made me smile :D. I love the 'administration' puns.
| Hawkeye-and-her-Flame 10/30/10 . chapter 1
:) I think you should this story...in Mustang's perspective. Or Hawkeye's. Poor Ed...can't put two and two together.
| elana59 10/15/10 . chapter 1
great story, i love how oblivious Ed is xD
| Mortichai 10/5/10 . chapter 1
oh man is ed really that clueless or is he in denial? by the way, i love the wording. its so formal. unlike some of the other junk you can barely read... My jaw hurts from smiling so much at your story :)