We didn't even get to see the best bits (the provocation and the wrestling match that followed) and this was still HOT. And I would never have guessed that you had no inclination towards MarLex whatsoever before writing this story. You write them like you've always meant for them to be this way. And I love their dynamic! I fully thought this was gonna be one-sided on Lexaeus' end and then was pleasantly surprised when Marluxia was the one hitting on him. I was a big fan of Marluxia and Xaldin actually but I think Lexaeus works just as nicely- better in fact. You should write more interactions between them! And I love that you slipped Larxene in there too. There aren't enough stories out there that focuses on the girlfriendship between Marluxia and Larxene. Please more! more!

Larxy and MArly make excellent girlfriends. 3

WHOAMYGODWHOAMYGOD MARLEX FANFICTION FINALLY 8'D -cries tears of happiness-

The world needs more MarLex, lol. This is the only MarLex fanfic out of like the 30k KH fanfictions on . XD

to be frank, this crack pairing is awesome. i like, love, that your doing crack with Lexaeus. hardly anyone ever does it

I'm most likely not the first to ask but... what... what kind of remarks was he making?