interesting, repeating history...:)

First B-centric fic I've ever read and I'm glad it was ;D

Liked the references to LABB, especially because I understood them XD

IPC

Yay, a BB fic! As you can tell by my name, I'm a big fan of him...hehehe...then again, I'm just like him, so...that shouldn't really matter. Good story. Keep writing.

i really liked this.

it had a very nice feel to it.

Interesting. Starts out as somewhat whimsical and potentially endearing, then turns creepy ... despite everything being apparently benign... I think B's "Not a chance," and the grinning non-answer were the closest identifiable thing to sinister, but the atmosphere and tone were spot-on throughout in conveying the creepy.

(I had to laugh at "Even I'm not that greedy ... we settled on $70.")

...WoW THis Is really god! I love this Execellent job Five Puls Stars On this !

I loved it! It's simple but it has a lot of meaning behind it.

Here's a list of things that I (THINK) found similar to the series:

1 - The candy store is the Wammy's Orphanage.

2 - B leaving for university is the same as him leaving the Wammy's.

3 - B starting the candy store is like the murders he commited for LABB.

4 - Being the best seller for candies is being the best criminal.

I think that's about it...But I'm sure there's still more? :)

Yay, you're finally updating again so I can point out grammar mistakes again. :P And trust me, there WAS one I spotted.

I...don't read/watch DN. Publish some Reborn, damnit! Something BESIDES the gayness that makes me run for the hills.

But back to the story...it's about candy...and people! I like! Even though I've never SEEN said people..oh well, never mind.

I liked it. L owning a mysterious candy store seems to fit really well, and I think your B is refreshing.

I'm really frustrated with myself for not understanding the 'symbolic-ness' of Misora...Is it something glaringly obvious that I'm missing due to exhaustion? ;

Anyway, great work with this.

First, I would like to point out that you mentioned that L unscrewed the lid of the jam and then handed it to B where he proceeded to unscrew the lid again. XD Simple error.

I'm pretty sure that I caught all the symbolisms, but if you don't mind, I'd like to hear you explain it all.

GUH *does not understand the significance of Misora* But from reading your Wammy Minds fic...I think I get the significance of

1) Staring above people's heads

2) Looking up to/ being drawn to L

3) Ryuzaki

4) B.

5) There might be a significance to the chocolate, maybe it shows how B doesn't like Mello...Or something XD I dunno. Sorry. OTL

LOL I can't believe I just made a list of things I understand OTL But now I wanna read that book! *does not have an e-bay account* GUH. Again.

Right, putting that aside...I liked it! XD I'm happy with the way it turned out too *shot* It's so very like L to own a candy store, methinks... and other than that ya did the first-person narrative pretty well. I haven't the faintest idea whether it's IC or not, but I'll assume it is XD

YUS! Write something sooner, dammit! I'm tired of waiting OTL