Wow... this story arc has really taken a new direction! At first, the previous were just funny, now things are getting serious, and I LOVE IT! You're writing is amazing and the characters are loveable. Please, Please, PLEASE UPDATE! I'm starving for more! :D

I have just read both stories in the space of a day. My eyes hurt. I want more :) Amazing.

Oh my God the roller-coaster of emotion this has put me through! I cry and I weep and I laugh and I am whole and then sorrowful and I cannot wait for more! This is hands down one of the most absolutely riveting pieces of awe I have ever seen, I have never been so emotionally pulled into a story on this sight before. I love this, I want more of this, I'm dying to continue on! Thank you for writing this, I feel inside of it, just so powerful...

Right now is this story my favorite PLEASE PLEASE keep on HURRY

I have just spent the last 3 days reading the entire Haleth saga.

You made me do some serious research in Numenor and Elda history.

...I also found that Inglor is the abandoned name for Finrod Felagund. But if that's the case what happened with Amarie?

Yay, another chapter! I always enjoy Haleth and her interactions with elves, and I loved how you had a no Haleth section in this one. As most of the story is told from her point of view, it's always nice to see somebody else's.

Thanks for writing!

I really love this story, but these short chapters are killing me! I think I'll leave it for a while and wait for some more to build up (if I can stay away for that long!)

;)

Oh Haleth ...

I really missed Inglor in this chapter, but maybe it's for the best ... I don't want Haleth to shout at him or hit him (it wouldn't be the first time!lol)! I hope things will get better for both of them!

I want them to have an 'happy end'!

Can't wait wait for the next chapter!

Glad Lalaeth to see a new chapter and hope more are on the way. It feels like all forward progress between Haleth and Inglor has been lost sigh

These two are hopelessly obtuse characters. Inglor and Haleth will give up their life for the other, but somehow, when it comes to admitting their true feelings toward each other, they muddle it up big time. I'm just imagining how Inglor, in his true Inglor fashion, would go about wooing and convincing Haleth. Haleth, on the otherhand, is always in denial. What to do with these two? You can throw these two completely undressed and locked in a room, and yet, they'll find a way to prevent the inevitable, or would they? I also love the fact that men elves are scarce in Valinor. Haleth needs to be pushed in a situation where she decides that she'll fight for her elf. LOL. What about Echtelion? I wonder if he'll further mess up the situation for Inglor and Haleth. The path of love never seems to run smooth for these two. Thanks so much for another chapter, Lalaeth. I can't wait how you are going to untangle this new revelation for Haleth.

Happy New Year!

Hi,I'v been reading your stories for some time now and never reviewed ... Well, here I am! lol

I love your stories! I love Haleth (Silmariën)! But my absolute favorite has to be Inglor ! I love your portrayals of Elves! They're fantastic!

As for that chapter well ... I hope they won't argue ...

I'm very curious about Inglor and I would really like to know if he's Finrod ? Will Haleth truly never die? Did she really took 'limpë' (is that the word?)?

I wish you would update soon! And sorry for my english, I hope it's not too horrible ...

Bye!

Oh, I have been waiting for the ring's reason to be revealed! But, but – why is Haleth so horrified about it? Alas, poor Inglor.

Haleth can muddle just about anything in her life :)

I really like your depiction of how perfection and eternity aren't necessarily always blessings. Food for thought.

Crossed fingers for our feisty pair...

Ooh an update! And the plot thickens. Haleth finally got a clue about what exactly her relationship with Inglor supposedly was according to him all this time, poor thing. "One man. One voice. Droning in her ear. Until she died.' Except I won't!' she wailed" made me laugh a lot. Hopefully there is either a way out of this or another side to Inglor's approach to romance...

Amazing, as always. I hadn't checked my mail in several days, and was very much hoping for a story update from somebody, and you were the only one. Thank you, you've made my New Years. One thing; I'm not sure if people of Arda would use the term 'fiance.' as I believe that is French. I might be wrong, but I've read more often 'betrothed' or some ancient term like that. And, now I have to go read Pitfalls again, so I can remember what the heck happened there. Normally I'd say the Silmarilion as well, but I started that again today.

Thank you very much for writing, and Happy New Years!

Cal

What, kwhaaaa? Inglor and Haleth have been engaged all this time? (whisper of awe) so many things make sense now...no, wait...still confused... )