I think it's really good. The only thing I had a problem with is that some of the things that happened didn't see very Trinity like, but that's ok because the rest of it was great and I'm just a freak about character voices.

Love this P

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wow this is amazing, i love it! its so in caracter! pls write more!

Brilliant story!

that was so cute. i really really liked it.

that was great! it was soo cute. the only thing is you forgot to mention how the oracle said that trinity would fall in love with a dead man. other than that it was great

I really like this one... I've often wondered what the Oracle said to Trin and this answered all of my questions! Write more please!

There was a type of sweet strength underlying this whole fic. I loved it. Continue writing because the world is only gifted with a few writers as talented as you.

Great story, very good descriptions. The ending was nice except i don't think Trinity's last line really fit in, but then again that's just me. Keep writing.

Very dood. I like it...keep writing...

Great mushy flick, i loved it! thanx, keep writing

that was really cool. i only saw the matrix a week ago, but i'm already addicted. the story was neat acuse u mixed the actual movie in your story. good job!

That was absolutly beautiful! I loved it and I hope you write something else really soon!

I can not get passed how well written this is. I've read it a couple times. Great job.