hmmm nice beautiful

Although I'm assuming this story is complete and reviews aren't too necessary, I wanted to say that I really really really enjoyed this story! It was so different than every other AkuRoku I normally read (in a good way!). Extremely adorable although so thank you for taking the time to write such an amazing story!

nice! first time I've read about a baby Roxas(with a big part in the story) rather nice change if I may say so;)

please continue soon

Aw, Roxy is growing up! I never would have thought Axel would have stolen a baby and run away...

i like how this is going so far, and i think it's fitting that you made Ventus Roxas's twin. they really do look alike. also, i like how you put Ven, Terra, and Aqua in the same village. :D good plotline!

heheh! Axel doesn't have any luck catching fish! Hm, I have a feeling that Axel taking away Roxas will screw up the whole system, because what will he do when Roxas turns 18 and remembers it all again? And even before that, he's running from not only Zexion, but scores of other people trying to take Roxas back. And bad Axel for thinking about abandoning Roxas! But of course, Axel never had to deal with this before, so it's a bit understandeble. The stress was getting to him!

And Axel is now Roxas' mama! XD He certainly has the hips in their relationship. -And Axel chases me around, trying to burn me for saying that- Hee, too bad Axel was asleep and couldn't hear Roxas call him Dada. But all your readers did! -Axel puts more effort into chasing me... Why hasn't he caught me yet? Oh right, because I have the magical powers of fangirlism-

I reaaly look forward to reading more! No matter how long it takes!

Aww Axel makes such a good Mama/Papa!

I'm really glad you decided to continue with this story! It's amazing!

Wait, wait, is it over? o.O

Please, don't let it be over...D:

Anyhoozles, really cute chapter! "Mama" Axel. xD

Anyway, saw the fan art, it was amazing! I almost fainted. xD

So yeah...I wanna give her cookies. :P

Love.

Cirque

Ehh : ) what an adorable cute chapter 3 Baby Roxas is so freaking cute 3

And aww mama Axel xD lol to cute 3

This was amazing, what a strange take on AkuRoku, totally different ending than one would expect. Not cliche at all! I love it!

8'D YEY! New chapter! TERRA! This is so wonderful and loving!

Axel is such a good Daddy! And Roxas... He's just adorable to no end! I'm loving this 3 And the good thing is that it's so different from anything I've read related to AkuRoku!

I laughed so much about Axel getting embarrassed about Roxy's little wee-wee xD

Good job and I can't wait for more! *huggles*

And awn! I gotz special thanks! *toothy face*

CHU CHU ;*

Jelly

aw that's SOO cute! I HAVE to read more of your stuff now... because I'm obsessed with this and if I'm obsessed with this than omg I will be obsessed with your other works! :P

I looked at the fanart and it's AH-MA-ZING!

GREAT chapter, and I love the mama/dada thing :P so cute!

Hana-chan

SO CUTE! Axel makes a pretty good father. I do hope there are still more chapters to come? Please. This is so good. We've come so far. I love this fic so much.

I... I cried... This is so sad...

It takes a LOT to make me cry...

You've done an amazing job with this fic, and it's so flowing. The ending is amazing, though I wish it were longer in a sense...

Excellent job. I give this a 10/5.

Hana-chan

I love the twists in this story. I think you should continue it.