Yo! Great story. I personally think you should continue it. It's quite interesting giving Rose an animal guardian. You could do a lot more with this story. I'm willing to be a beta if you do wish to continue with it :)

I absolutely LOVE this story! I looked at the picture of Ayame on your DA profile and she looked absolutely adorable! You're a fantastic writer and a magnificent artist! I loved all of it! :D You should definately write more about these two! :D LOVED IT!

-RidingtheRoughWaters

IS THIS THE BEGINGIMG?

Well, nice story, though not really exciting, but that's not a problem. Thanks for not having made spelling mistakes, it always makes story awfully hard to read when there are mistakes every word out of three. Just one thing, about the tiny little French bit: French only use "vous" when talking to several people, unless they want to be formal. It should be "S'il te plait". But still, nice story.

Good story. I think more stories would be great.