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You should definatly continue this...I really like it

really really good kinda thought there would b more

hey please update soon i love it... i know tat it is a complete story but i think the majority of people who read this story want you to continue :D

You're supposed to make the conversation on another line.

For Example:

TWILIGHT

"You've got to give me answers." Bella sighed frustratedly.

"Yes, no, to get to the other side, 1.77245385-" Edward answered until he was rudely interrupted by the impatient human across from hum.

"I don't want to know the square root of pi!" She stated as she rolled her eyes.

"You knew that?" Edward asked, astonished by her high level of intelligence.

END

LOL I just added the Edward asked blah blah blah Bella said blah blah blah. -

more spaces it looks like you've written more and plz write more

oh, i was really hoping that you were going to turn this into a story. i love where it is going

I am intrigued by this start. Please continue it!

wow! this is really good! please please please update this story! x

i really like this i think u shld add to it!

Editing's fine... Is this DEFINITELY only a O/S or will you continue it into a multi-Ch. fic(regardless of length)?

nice. but each quote gets its wn paragraph. makes it easyer to rread and such. i hope you continue, but why is it labled complete?

A great story. Very well written.

love it!

I really like this kind of stories. You should continue :)