|Reviews for Dempsey & Makepeace One More Bite Of The Apple|
| Louise 12/21/12 . chapter 119
Just found this. Really great. Thankyou for sharing it.
| aunt sal 6/13/12 . chapter 119
wow,that was an epic story. Everything was fab even the sad bits cause I knew the end would be only someone could make that into a film... Thanks for writing it
| abeed 3/27/12 . chapter 114
So I've reached the end of my second bite of the apple and have enjoyed every word of it just as much as the first time round! Such a brilliant ending to such an exceptional piece of writing! From start to finish it's been such an epic and emotional journey. You had me in tears more times than i'd care to admit and I often found I literally couldn't put the story down! The terrible heartfelt lows were at times just too much to bear but were more than worth it for the incredible highs! From start to finish I felt their pain, their torment, their happiness and joy and most of all their undying love for each other! What a story! Thanks Kayt! X
| abeed 3/25/12 . chapter 110
Ooh that Juliette is one bitter woman. Kinda liked how Julius wasn't impressed by her disclosure. Think he really likes and respects Harry now & gets that she & Dempsey are meant to be.
| abeed 3/25/12 . chapter 109
"No chocolate fudge cake for you then, huh?" he said, squeezing her hand.
Fixing a smile, Harry repeated, "No chocolate fudge cake."
"Nah, we're missin' the repartee here," he said, still keeping hold of her hand. "I tell you you can't have the chocolate fudge cake," he gestured towards her, "you say, 'hey, who are you to tell me I can't have the chocolate fudge cake?' or words to that effect…" he jerked a thumb towards himself, "and then I come in with my line, 'well, if you got a headache, you ain't gonna be able to work it off with me later'." Ha! Love it! #puredempsey!
However I'm not loving the way Harry is doubting him right now but...11 seconds is 11 seconds... #men
| abeed 3/23/12 . chapter 107
Ha! Take that Juliette! 11 seconds is 11 seconds though and I'm not liking him being capable of doing that, not to Harry. Suppose he set her straight in the end though. Feel bad for Jack stuck in the middle of all this.
| abeed 3/23/12 . chapter 106
Nooooooooooo! What the bloody hell are you playing at Dempsey? #harry #harry #harry
Really not liking this woman one bit! She really needs to sod off now!
| abeed 3/23/12 . chapter 103
I like Jack :-)
| abeed 3/23/12 . chapter 102
"Look, I'll leave you two to thrash it out…"
"Why don't you take her with you," Dempsey spoke caustically, "and drop her off at the nearest Travel Lodge."
He said 'Travel Lodge' – they heard 'bridge'. Ha Ha Ha!
'... he leaned in to a momentary embrace all the same as they exchanged a brief and deliberately casual kiss.'
"You got everythin' you need?" he murmured intimately.
She nodded, whispering, "almost." - Nice! X
| abeed 3/22/12 . chapter 101
YIKES! Bugger right off back to Jersey Juliette!
| abeed 3/18/12 . chapter 98
Yogging in the bath! Lol
| abeed 3/18/12 . chapter 97
Aaah really enjoyed them enjoying breakfast... 'his hand absently caressing her leg whilst they talked and ate.' They are just so incredibly comfortable together. :-)
Ain't never gonna take the 'dirty' outa Harry." lol!
| abeed 3/17/12 . chapter 96
'In their cocooned world, they soothed each other with anodyne flesh and words of love and when the climax tore through them, sweet and entire, they had finally found each other again.' In the words of the man himself... "Wow!"
| abeed 3/14/12 . chapter 95
| abeed 3/14/12 . chapter 94
She leaned in to him, pressing her forehead against his, her eyes closed. "I love you." 'Nothing. No reply, just a strange stillness that meshed invisibly with the night.'
"I can't love anyone but you, James."
"I love you," she tried again. "Say something," she begged, pulling his head back to her, forcing him to look at her.
And then she realised he was crying...