I really liked how you used the prologue of the movie! But, I think in the movie, the dog's name was Toby. That doesn't matter. All that matters is that your story was VERY good! :-)

This was awesome, except for a few things:

-The little dog's name was Toby, not Ted

-Jo was asleep when the twister hit, and her mother got her

-The father kept saying, "I can't hold it any longer!" Not "I love you." It would be awesome if he had, though!

So sad :( I just watched Twister again a few days ago and really hated what happened there. Great job on writing! I liked it.

this is pretty good a few minor errors like the dogs name was "Toby" not Ted and they weren't eating ice cream either in the movie but other than that it's pretty good!