i liked it!

WOOT! That Was Great! D I So Knew Lucy Would Win! LOL! XD Great Job! D

I liked it a llllot :D It also made me laugh expecially in the last part xD

Oh, and also, the sex-scene description was really good :D

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Damn, that was a good story xD

Its stupid how this doesn't have more reviews, but hopefully more peeps will read this.

Anyway, keep up the good work; hope to read more soon!

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D : this was amazing! why does this not have more reviews? it's so fan-fucking-tastic! omg i loved this so much!

you rushed into it a little bit with shaun just walking over there and then all of a sudden they were havin sex. you could have slowed it down a bit with some thoughts from them. but then after that omg i squeed so much at this!

very good! XD loved it to death

Ooh. Yummy. ;D

I like your writing style.

And the mansexings.

And Lucy/Rebecca.

Great job!