*Fi would be proud.*

This line saved it!

Ok fun, but I don't think I would have had Michael shoot Gilroy (not that we all didn't rejoice when he exploded). It think it would have been better if maybe you had drawn it out a bit more and then tweaked the plot to where when his dealings with him were all done, Mike could just kick the living crap out of him with an emphasis on on the "unwanted attention." Just a thought.

high five, totally approve of this ending

lol nicley done.

Omg that was hysterical and amazing. I really wish they would off gilroy he's a total creeper! Very good and in character except the end but I like it way too much lol

cool story.