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Halfcarrot 11/6/10 . chapter 13
I wish I had had this idea!

I like the fact that each of the fairies has a different personality, and that it shows in their gift.

Love it!

-Halfcarrot
EmmBee 5/4/10 . chapter 12
This is not what I expected from the fairy who cursed Sleeping Beauty, but I like it. I always like seeing a not-evil side of the traditionally-evil characters in fairy tales, and the point about how a life without thrills isn't really much of a life is interesting-again, not what I expected from this fairy.

This is an excellent story; the writing is superb and the idea is unique. While a part of me wishes you would write the story to follow up on this-where we'd get to see how this little princess uses all her gifts-another part of me just likes how it is and almost prefers to be allowed to imagine it. Either way, though, excellent job, and thank you for sharing!

EmmBee
Lauren 5/3/10 . chapter 13
This is AWESOME! I wish we could see what happened...how it worked out.
LaLa De Dum 4/17/10 . chapter 8
I have one word for this... enchanting. No joke. For some reason when I think of your story I think... enchanting. And I love this so much I even have my fingers crossed that you'll write a story to go along with it! Because I love your stories. And I love Sleeping Beauty.
Iliana11 4/16/10 . chapter 1
Eh, why not throw in my two bits as well. I really love this concept of the different gifts given to the princess. Your writing style is beautiful and fits perfectly for this type of story. I honestly can't wait until the next update.

Yet as the gifts get more numerous and profound, I can't help but think, aren't these things something all of us, as humans, can try to work on? Maybe they don't come naturally, like they will for this little child, but we can try. By the grace of God, we can try. Just a small thought I thought I'd share. Please update soon! I'm curious to see what gifts you put next. Excellent work!
ImaRocketDog 4/16/10 . chapter 7
Nicely done. I've sometimes wondered what the fairies' reasons were for their gifts. All the reasons make a lot of sense and I love your writing style. Can't wait to read about the other gifts!
Lauren 4/15/10 . chapter 7
Awesome! Please update!
Platinum692 3/9/10 . chapter 4
Okay,

my question is,

is this a story or just lists?

Will it turn into a story?

If it does, I will certainly read.

I hope for the next chapter!
Duchess Delanie 2/26/10 . chapter 3
Aw... adorable! I think grace is a virtue often forgotten. Keep going with these. This is a brilliant collection.
Duchess Delanie 2/26/10 . chapter 2
I LOVED this one! Great message for life. Both the good and the bad. These gifts seem to be more of admonished advice, which I think is best.
Duchess Delanie 2/26/10 . chapter 1
Wow. This is a really good idea! And sweet. The concept of what Beauty is in this chapter is a little vague, but maybe that's how you intended it. This fairy seems to worry that hers will be considered a vain gift. I like that.
LunaPadma 2/25/10 . chapter 2
Wow, this is really profound! I wasn't expecting it when I clicked on it! Keep it up!
Tiger Lily21 2/22/10 . chapter 1
What an interesting idea! I always did wonder why the fairies chose those gifts. I hope to see the next explanation soon.
LKB 2/22/10 . chapter 1
Awesome. Keep it up!
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