interesting story but many many problems and can't agree to your plot because it doesn't make sense.

a) Harry's scar would not hurt. It is with Voldemort that he is connected not Sauron

b) Mortal magic from Arwen - this is simply stupid. There were many sourceres in middle earth and more then one union between an elf and a man.

c) What of the language? It would have changed a lot of time. I guess even the world is recreated. Middle earth is no more...

d) Dumbledore as Gandlals is cool - but unlickely and dumb.

Really if you want a quality story you got to think more logically of what you write.

Hello. This was a very nice fic. I liked the arrival of Frodo and Sam into Hogwarts and met Harry and the gang. Its just too bad that Harry was killed off. You could've let him live to say bye to Frodo.

this is a fantastic story!

OMG, this was SUCH an INCREDIBLE fic; i must admit i haven't read a lot of fanfics, picked this up off a LOTR messageboard but still even i can tell that this is just one of a kind. maybe you could email me if you write any more fics? you can reach me at . you are a v. talented writer and i can't wait to see more of your stuff! loved the part w/ frodo and hermione, also liked how you portrayed voldemort as "fair" and put snape in a better light than usual. also, it was very neat, the way you created an awesome story that made us all laugh and cry and want more and then wrapped it all back up so as not to mess with the set storylines of lotr/hp. thanks 4 this awesome fanfic!

frodo'shighschoolsweetheart21

Wow, that was awesome! You are a very talented writer and did not infringe on either story's existing plot. I loved that story!

Holy smokes. What a WONDERFUL story. Very clever... My favourite part is when Sam asks if he supposes Gandalf went to Hogwarts. .. Very well done, thanks for adding some much needed distraction to my evening. :)

Wow, this is awesome. Love book cossover fics, this is one is one of a kind, I must say. Continue if it not finished as I am still on chapter 2. :)

Very cool. Thought you exicuted your story quite nicely. I believe you should write some more. Just the way you wrote it reminded me of both Tolkien and Rowling. The detail, drama and the feeling of Frodo's pain and determination from Tolkien. Along with the humor, power, and the quick intelect like in Rowling's work. But I also noticed one thing that both of the authors had that you also had, though you might've not noticed it. The powerful bond between friends. The love that each of them share with one another. I truley enjoyed this and I wish you the best of luck with your burdens and hardships. May your life be a joyous one. Farewell...Naamarie.

great, grand, wonderful! is there anything else I could say?

dreamingfifi

Ahh! I love your story.. it's great.. The whole idea is so original.. Sorry im going crazy over your story. D

-Sileas/Jacqueline...

by the way- i've added you to my author alert list if you don't mind..

The best story I have seen on the site. I am a big fan of Tolkien & Rowling and this is in some aspects better than them!

That was the coolest! Write another one, please.

I don't normally read that much fanfiction, but I found this on and started reading it. You have executed your idea very well, as far as I have read. The connections of the backgrounds of both stories are woven together very well. The writing is excellent. The ending of this first chapter is great. Very nice job.

I am sat here wondering why I didn't read this before. And about to read it again. My one criticism is Severus Snape saying "gotten"... I'm sure I've mentioned that to you before... In another time, another place. ;-) Man, and I thought Vert's fics were intimidating to follow...

This is such a sweet, cute, thrilling story, I love it! I dare say you have talent! Keep up with the good work!

LadyLaura020